tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5747737444977924398.post2144419057885051584..comments2023-10-02T08:01:30.988-07:00Comments on ChitChat: Poetry Friday for YOUDonna Jones Koppelmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12857811448882017818noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5747737444977924398.post-70166031200176407402008-10-20T20:24:00.000-07:002008-10-20T20:24:00.000-07:00Ooooh! I can see it all. Fall is my fave season. N...Ooooh! I can see it all. Fall is my fave season. Nicely done!<BR/><BR/>hugs,<BR/>DonnaWrite2ignitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266315375662322726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5747737444977924398.post-41998643491372997752008-10-20T20:12:00.000-07:002008-10-20T20:12:00.000-07:00Love both of your poems. Mine isn't as awe inspir...Love both of your poems. Mine isn't as awe inspiring but here is my attempt.<BR/>Quilts cozying<BR/>Rakes raking<BR/>Sweaters bundling<BR/>Temperatures dropping<BR/>Fall boldly arrives.Kelly Polarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10968381456100611120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5747737444977924398.post-26911938333234657742008-10-20T18:03:00.000-07:002008-10-20T18:03:00.000-07:00I've never tried this kind of poem before...will t...I've never tried this kind of poem before...will try one and post later! Thank you for the idea. I love poetry!Kelly Polarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10968381456100611120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5747737444977924398.post-89434782620272361762008-10-18T10:08:00.000-07:002008-10-18T10:08:00.000-07:00BTW - your poem is very, VERY nice. beautiful word...BTW - your poem is very, VERY nice. beautiful word picture! The last line hooked me! :) <BR/><BR/>okay, one last revision. :) <BR/>I'll even combine all three on this comment and delete the other two so they don't take up so much room. :) <BR/><BR/>1st version<BR/>Every mountain peak reaching<BR/>Fountains of water rushing<BR/>Gushing volcanoes exploding<BR/>His Glory unleashed upon the earth<BR/>And I am undone.<BR/><BR/>2nd version <BR/>Every mountain peak crumbling<BR/>Forging waters rushing<BR/>Gushing volcanoes exploding<BR/>His Glory unleashed upon the earth<BR/>And I am undone.<BR/><BR/>3rd version<BR/>Every mountain peak crumbling, bowing<BR/>Forging water rushing, running<BR/>Gushing volanoes unable to contain their praise<BR/>His Glory unleashed upon the earth<BR/>and I am undone<BR/><BR/>my husband says 'eh'. None are better or worse than the rest. :)Write2ignitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266315375662322726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5747737444977924398.post-53318898852731658032008-10-18T08:19:00.000-07:002008-10-18T08:19:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Write2ignitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266315375662322726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5747737444977924398.post-39581495339495995402008-10-18T08:15:00.000-07:002008-10-18T08:15:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Write2ignitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266315375662322726noreply@blogger.com