tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5747737444977924398.post7917826185621163653..comments2023-10-02T08:01:30.988-07:00Comments on ChitChat: Poetry Friday- whoo hoo!Donna Jones Koppelmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12857811448882017818noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5747737444977924398.post-82183913516895956132009-01-30T15:29:00.000-08:002009-01-30T15:29:00.000-08:00I meant to say that are NOT perfect!!! ARRRGGGH!!!...I meant to say that are NOT perfect!!! ARRRGGGH!!!Write2ignitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266315375662322726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5747737444977924398.post-56296353498264436612009-01-30T14:55:00.000-08:002009-01-30T14:55:00.000-08:00I like it! Mine is really thrown together - so ign...I like it! Mine is really thrown together - so ignore the end rhymes that are perfect. :) <BR/><BR/><BR/>Submission Angst<BR/><BR/>Like the crashing of waves <BR/>on the sand studded shore<BR/>Frustration breaks over my day<BR/>I scream deep inside<BR/>I’d like to go hide<BR/>I need a few moments to pray<BR/><BR/>Enough with the “forms”<BR/>Enough with “next time”<BR/>Enough with the “thanks – but not thanks”<BR/>With each little “no”<BR/>My frustration grows<BR/>I need dough to put in the bank!Write2ignitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266315375662322726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5747737444977924398.post-42125330178975592992009-01-30T14:28:00.000-08:002009-01-30T14:28:00.000-08:00good poem, Donna. It flows. Wonder if you could ge...good poem, Donna. It flows. Wonder if you could get it published in Writer's Digest or at least Pen and Pallet? <BR/><BR/>Good luck with the PB you're sending around.Dorothyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06339997444699943878noreply@blogger.com